Posted: 2011-04-06 11:28:50
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My teacher says the punctuation is wrong but I don’t know why.
I wrote
My education prepares me for future. Even at work and at school. I learn skills that will help. Even in the real world.

Posted: 2011-04-11 20:06:49
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Hi,

Instead of writing several short sentences, use commas to join them. A sentence should flow nice and evenly. Try to avoid short and choppy sentences.

Hope that helps :)